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By Jimmy Tiep

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Following is a short excerpt from the screenplay of a famous film, "Assassins". Learn by example as a saying goes!

ASSASSINS
 
 
 
                                 Draft by 
 
                              Brian Helgeland
 
 
                          Based on a Screenplay by
 
                          Larry and Andy Wachowski
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
                                                 March 30, 1995
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
        FADE IN:
 
        EXT. PLAZA COLON/INT. BANK - DAY (1980)
 
        BLACK and WHITE.  The past was so clear-cut.  Or was it?
 
        Tiled roofs, the stark white stucco of a colonial town
        square.  Black iron bars at a bank.  A briefcase carried 
        in a man's hand.  A sniper's rifle being assembled.  Thick
        blocks of hundred dollar bills.  Placed in the briefcase.  
        A man's teeth as he smiles grimly at the sight. 
 
        Sounds over a SUBJECTIVE VIEW.  The BRIEFCASE SNAPS SHUT.  
        A VAULT DOOR SLAMS.  RUBBER SOLES WALK a tiled floor.  
        Ahead, brilliant, white light suffuses the exit.  Like 
        the way people describe near-death eperiences.  We're 
        either going outdoors or over to the other side. 
 
        A long rifle silencer juts from a window.  We see the
        shooter FROM BEHIND, a view OVER his shoulder.
 
        In the bank, the man crushes out a cigarette.  A pause
        and a DEEP EXHALE as we step outside into a flood of light.  
        In answer, the LOW PUFF of a SILENCER.
 
        Only the plaza pigeons notice.  As they take flight... 
 
        A man lies dead on the cobblestones.  And as we look UP 
        TOWARD the window, there's nothing there.  The pigeons
        wheel above the plaza.  We FOLLOW, finally losing them
        to the sky.  SLOWLY that sky BLEEDS from gray to blue.
 
        And as we PAN BACK DOWN...
 
                                                   DISSOLVE TO:
 
 
        EXT. MARSH - SUNSET
 
        We're no longer in a plaza, but in a vast marshland.  Not
        in the past, but in the present.  The sun sparkles over
        the water.  Two silhouetted figures move past in the dis-
        tance.  One walks a little behind the other.
 
        The man in front is KETCHAM.  He wears an expensive suit
        and Gucci loafers.  He swats at flies nearly too small to
        see, curses under his breath at the calf-deep mud.
 
        The man behind is RATH.  He moves easier; the flies don't
        seem to bother him at all.  His jeans are tucked into 
        rubber boots.  He holds a silenced .22 at his side.  Like 
        it was part of him. 
 
        They continue until one of Ketcham's shoes is sucked off
        by the mud.
 
                                KETCHAM
                  Aw-shit...
 
       Ketcham balances on one leg, holding his silk-socked 
       foot in the air.  The shoe disappears, filled with mud.
 
                                KETCHAM
                  When I first saw you I wasn't 
                  scared.  I was just wondering why 
                  you were dressed like that.
                         (re:  mud)
                  Now I know.  
               
       Ketcham pulls off his sock, sticks his foot in the mud.
       He smiles.  It feels good.  He pulls off the other shoe, 
       tosses it.  Grabbing for the other sock, he loses his 
       balance and sits down in the mud. 
 
       Rath waits patiently as Ketcham laughs at the absurdity
       of it all.  Ketcham finally pulls the sock off, then 
       stands, digs his toes into the dark, wet earth. 
 
                                KETCHAM 
                  This feels good. 
               
       They move on, Rath still a little behind.  Ketcham enjoys
       the new sensation, but after a bit, the pleasure fades. 
 
                                KETCHAM
                  It's twisted, but I'm honored.  
                  You're the best.  It means at 
                  least they're still afraid of me. 
                       
       Ketcham looks ahead as they close on a grove of trees. 
       He knew they were going somewhere, but it's a chilling
       realization all the same. 
 
                                KETCHAM 
                  I knew this day would come.  But 
                  this morning, I could've sworn I 
                  was going to live forever. 
               
       They're only a few steps away from the first of the 
       trees.  Desperation begins to creep into Ketcham's voice.
 
                                KETCHAM
                  Any chance of you telling me who 
                  the Contractor was?  Huh?
                         (off no answer)
                  At least tell me how much I was
                  worth.  A dime?  Two?
               
       They're into the trees.  Ketcham doesn't need to be told.
       He stops just where a dead branch hangs from a tree. 
 
                                KETCHAM
                  Here?
 
       Rath uses the .22 to gesture Ketcham to the left.  Ketcham 
       gives the branch a wistful smile.  Leaving his last hope 
       behind, he takes a few steps over. 
 
                                KETCHAM 
                  We both play the game, Rath.  
                  Sooner or later the wheel turns.
                  For everybody.  Who's got your
                  bullet?  What kind of shoes'll
                  you be wearing when the day comes?
 
       Rath's answer is to move directly behind him.  Ketcham 
       is finally showing his fear.
 
                                KETCHAM
                  Whatever the contract is, I'll
                  double it.  Just say you couldn't 
                  find me.  Buy yourself some good 
                  karma. 

Author: Jimmy is a freelance journalist and copywriter. Contact him at brahmasretinue@yahoo.com

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